i really liked this! a really interesting world you set up and the conflict was very interesting. i think liam’s personality was hard to follow through by the end of the story, but this still had genuine emotional pull and that’s really hard to do, especially in a competition like this one that limits how much you can write! good work and thanks for participating, i hope to see you in the next one!
jamriot
i really liked this! a really interesting world you set up and the conflict was very interesting. i think liam’s personality was hard to follow through by the end of the story, but this still had genuine emotional pull and that’s really hard to do, especially in a competition like this one that limits how much you can write! good work and thanks for participating, i hope to see you in the next one!
InTheNowEventually
ill totally participate in the next one and thank you for the feed back!